Thoughts penned down...

Thursday, November 02, 2006

Udaan... The flight


Dekha meine ik chote
Panchi ko bharte udaan;
Peeche uske mata – pita
Karne madad jab aaye dhalaan.

Socha meine, ik din mein bhi,
Ud jaoonga is jag se pare;
Jahan na ho ye jagwasi
Klesh, dhwand aur krosh se bhare.

Ik din mein bhi mil jaoonga
Us neele akaash mein
Udta-udta bas jaaoonga
Door kahi is pyas mein.

Is udan mein jeevan,
hein kitne sukh se bharaa
hein nahi koi simta
hein nahi koi daraa.

Socha meine kyon na mein bhi
Bharkar dekhoo ek udaan
Par aatmavishwas nahi
Kya sambhloonga jab aaye dhalaan?

Sach poocho to kya yah vaaky
Mere liye koi mayine rakhta hei?
Mein, jo ek saada baalak,
Maata ke sneh ko rota hoon.
Mein, jo ek saada baalak
Udne ki nahi
Chalne ki aasha karta hoon......


Guys, wondering wot i have written???? Well, that’s a poem written by “ME” wen in college.. ya u read it right. It’s my poem written for one of those Hindi competitions ;)… I know, many wud not have read the entire thing, unable to find any meaning in that ;)..
Just go thru it once, if u have not done that already…( I know, atleast the ppl who know me will do that much for me :) )…

In case u didn’t get wot I wanted to convey thru the poem (well, its not ur mistake if u didn’t understand, he he he the problem lies with the amateur way the poem is written ;) )..
shall explain…
It’s about the dream of a small child who dreams of flying high in the vast sky...
The dream of a young orphan boy who yearns for the love of his parents... a handicapped boy for whom even a step walked alone is a dream come true…


I know, the poem has lots of flaws in it.. I mean the way it is presented n the words used n may be many more to list..

But, that was not the main intension in posting it... just wanted to convey that :

Ppl… DO thank god for all the wonders he has given us..
The ability to walk, to c, to feel, to love…
Appreciate wot u have..
Enjoy life, the way it comes :)
Enjoy togetherness....
Happy living ppl :)



7 Comments:

At Thursday, 02 November, 2006, Blogger Asha said...

thank god... tumne kuch achcha bola...yup me happy :)

 
At Friday, 03 November, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

That was a nice blog, i think i am pretty much impressed by the way you had expressed the feelings.
Definitely we should thank god for all the luxuries in our life compared to the ones expressed in your blog.

 
At Friday, 03 November, 2006, Blogger Asha said...

ya swad.. v shud thank god always for wot all he has given us. v tend to take the wonders for granted wen v have them.. v come to realise its value only wen its lost..that shud never be the case i feel...

 
At Friday, 03 November, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

hi ad ...
hmm kavita masta hai .. thodi bhari hai ..lekin dubara padh ne se kuch to palle padta hai ...
lekin es bar ka blog thoda chota laga :(
baki mast ..
ek request ..
mere liye kuch "dosti" pe bolg likho na accha ..
vishal

 
At Sunday, 05 November, 2006, Blogger Asha said...

hey vish...
kisi ne mujhse bola ki bahut lamba likhti hoon mein.. to is baar thoda chota kiya :(.. lekin aap bolte ho to agla khooooooooooob lamba likhoongi :)....
yup will try to write the "dosti" blog for u...

 
At Saturday, 11 November, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

He this one is particularly written too beautifully..though short has lotsa depth in it...
Ask God for More,but at the same time Thank God for what u Have!!!...Too good..

 
At Sunday, 03 December, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

hey Asha...so ur a poetess too..in Hindi..!!Good Goin :) nice blog..Keep writing!!

Cheers,
Priths

 

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